1、第10讲读后续写目录新知导航：熟悉题型、掌握知识脉络基础知识：知识点全面梳理，掌握必备重点记忆：关键点快速记忆，提升能力小试牛刀：考点剖析+过关检测，合理应用一题型概述读后续写满分25分，提供一段350词左右的语言材料(多为故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章) ，要求考生依据该材料内容所给段落开头语进行续写，为其补充一篇150词左右，与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理和结构完整的短文。读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。二评分原则：1)内容：内容的丰富性、故事发展的合理
2、性，续写的完整性2)词汇语法：使用语言的多样性、准确性和恰当性；(语言为交际服务，不可一味使用所谓“高级”语言，要与原文语言特点保持一致。)3)篇章结构：上下文的衔接(包括续写段落之间的衔接)连贯性；4)写作规范：词数少于130的，扣2分；拼写和标点符号错误多将分数降低一个档次；如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次；三如何读和写：读：1:读懂原文： 找出6要素(Actions，feelings，settings); 理清情节，提炼问题和解决方法(a story mountain：conflict-solution); 2:构思情节： 原文结尾+2个段首句，通过问答，构建写作框架; “拿
3、来”原文的提示语料：推动续写情节；(reasonable, logical)3:研究时态;(过去时)。写：(1)写好两段首尾句;(逻辑衔接好)(2)“问题”与“解决”;(结构完整)(3)动作与情感双曲线;(情节好)(4)抓准伏笔，回扣前文。(点亮全文)如何写读后续写1.理清已知信息精读文章，关注细节和脉络。阅读是读后续写的起点，起点的高低直接影响着续写能达到的高度，因此考生要通过阅读梳理文中主要人物之间的关系、主要人物的性格特点、故事发展线索，以便把握故事的走向，构建情节。厘清主要信息不仅可以帮助考生理解故事情节，推断故事发展方向，同时对续写时的人物描写有指导作用。2. 研判续写方向(1)定文
4、章基调在读完文章后，考生要根据各段落的主旨，明确文章的整体构架和中心思想。此外，考生需要通过文中的细节描述来确定续写内容的基调，如分析描写人物的形容词和人物发出的动作、文中的对话、所给的两个续写段首句来确定续写的基调，寻找续写的切入口，从而展开合理的情节想象。(2)定文章走向所给续写段落开头语对故事发展有提示、衔接、引导和限制作用。续写时，考生要站在作者的角度，继承原文写作思路，需要注意续写内容应积极向上，设计的结局应是正向的，如意外事件类的续写结局应是事情得以解决。此外，续写第二段的开头往往暗示着第一段的故事走向。(3)定续写框架在读后续写中，细读是起点，写作则是重点，而建构是难点。考生可将
5、梳理出的信息和拓展的细节结合形成故事发展的要点，从而构建简单的续写故事框架。另外，在写作时，考生应注意句子结构的多样性、词汇的丰富性，利用储备的语言知识，根据内容慎重选择词汇、词块和句式，且有意识地使用高级句式，使表达富有感染力。此外，考生还应该注意续写内容与所给段落首句的衔接程度。3润色(1)要使用高级词汇及短语使用高等级词汇使用短语使用谚语(2)句式要有变化复合句 (主语宾语表语同位语定语状语从句)倒装句(1 )否定词置于句首(2)only+状语置于句首强调句型：It is that (who)固定句子结构：tooto，sothat，not until，not onlybut also，n
6、eithernor (3)使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺， 并列and; as well as ; also; too, 选择or; either.or.; 原因because (of) ;owing to; due to ; thanks to 结果so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result 比较on the contrary ; compared to , 转折but ; yet; however ; 递进besides ; moreover ; in addition 举例for example; such as ; that is ;take for exa
7、mple 读后续写 Passage1(2023上安徽芜湖高一统考期末)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段文字，使之构成一篇完整的短文。As is known to all, the traffic is very poor and heavy. The bus or the train is really crowded. Every time I go home from my company or leave home for my company, I have to accept such a hard experience though I have been used
8、 to it.On a cold December morning in 2020, I boarded a bus with my four bags which were large. Luckily, there were two empty seats left. About one hour later, a well-dressed young guy got on and took the seat next to mine. I was cautious. I would often come across guys who were eager to talk to a gi
9、rl travelling on her own. So I was not surprised when he spoke up.“Where are you going?” he asked.“Rampur Bushehr,” I replied briefly and put on my earphones to enjoy some music or to avoid talking with him. He did not bother me after that as if he had known my idea.It started to rain and cold water
10、 was dropping through the roof right on to my lap. Seeing that, the guy emptied a plastic shopping bag full of clothes, which he pushed into his travel bag. He then handed me the plastic bag. I accepted it with a sheepish (困窘的) “thanks” before spreading it on my lap.Minutes later, the bus broke down
11、! The conductor announced we would have to move to another bus that would reach us shortly, and that there would be no more buses after that, since there had been heavy snowfalls. All the passengers of the bus got off and stood on the side of the road, ready to rush into the next bus. The conductor
12、unwillingly helped me get off the bus with my luggage and I too waited with other passengers.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When the bus finally arrived, it had many passengers already. _As the bus left for my hometown, I looked around for the guy. _Passage 2(2023上河北唐山高一统考期末)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段
13、落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was the last practice before the big gymnastics competition in Burlingville. The gymnastics team of Springtown High School had been training every day in the school vacation. They tried harder and wanted to do better. They had competed with the team from Maidstone High School
14、 several times. The competitions allowed the two teams to admire each other for their excellent performance and players qualities. They respected the game; they respected each others team more.Today, the players of Springtown went home earlier. They would pack some food and water to have along the w
15、ay to Burlingville. Before they went home, they went to their teacher to see their new uniform. Springton High School was in the countryside. The team made cookies and sold them at the market to get money to buy the uniform. They loved it very much, even though they were impressed with the uniforms
16、of the team from Maidstone. Maidstone High School was a rich private school. It usually prepared two sets of uniforms for the competition one for the morning and the other for the afternoon.Early the next morning, the team of Springtown High School and their teacher got on a minibus to start their l
17、ong trip. They would reach the railway station in Travers at about two oclock and then take a train to Burlingville. They must be there by six oclock and register for the competition.The bus driver drove the bus through the country roads. Then suddenly, he parked the bus at the side of the road. The
18、re was something wrong with the engine. Unluckily, the driver couldnt fix it in a short time. He called the company and asked them to send another bus for the gymnastics team. It was 90 minutes before another minibus came. Everyone jumped onto the bus. “Please hurry,” said the teacher.When they fina
19、lly arrived at Travers railway station, the bus driver helped the team carry the bags into the station. As soon as they got on the train, it started to move. Looking out of the window, the teacher saw the bus driver running towards the train door.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.开头已给出。“Oh, no!” the teacher shoute
20、d. “The driver has our uniform bag!”_Caught in complete hopelessness, the team from Springtown saw the players of Maidstone walking towards them._Passage 3(2023上湖南衡阳高一统考期末)阅读下面的材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。After 22 years of marriage, I have discovered the secret to keep love alive in my relati
21、onship with my wife, Peggy. I started dating with another woman. It was Peggys idea. One day she said to me, “Life is too short, you need to spend time with the people you love. You probably wont believe me, but I know you love her and I think that if the two of you spend more time together, it will
22、 make us closer.”The “other” woman my wife was encouraging me to date is my mother, a 72-year-old widow who has lived alone since my father died 20 years ago. Right after his death, I moved 2, 500 miles away to California and started my own life and career. When I moved back near my hometown six yea
23、rs ago, I promised myself that I would spend more time with Mom. But with the demands of my job and three kids, I never got around to seeing her much beyond family get-togethers and holidays. Mom was surprised when I called and suggested the two of us go out to dinner. “Whats wrong?” she asked. “I t
24、hought it would be nice to spend some time with you,” I said. “Just the two of us.”“I would like that a lot,” she said. When I pulled into her driveway, she was waiting by the door with her coat on. Her hair was curled, and she was smiling. “I told my friends I was going out with my son, and they we
25、re all impressed. They cant wait to hear about our evening,” Mom said. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好：Para 1: Minutes later, we arrived at a restaurant in the neighborhood. _Para 2:“How was your date?” Peggy asked when I got home. _Passage 4(2023上湖南益阳高一统考期末)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,
26、 使之构成一篇完整的短文。Once there lived a girl named Melanie. The little girl was living with a dream. She wanted to be a ballet dancer. Her body was very flexible and she had a strong will power. Melanies parents never knew of the great dancing skills their daughter had until one day, they saw the little gir
27、l dancing with the beautiful steps of a ballerina.“Isnt it strange? Melanie is dancing so well without any formal training!” the mother said.“We must give her ballet lessons to help her improve her skills,” her father said.The following day, Melanies parents took her to a local dance training school
28、. The teacher asked Melanie to dance. The little girl was happy and showed some of her favorite dance steps. However, the teacher didnt seem interested in her performance.“Thats OK. You can leave now!”the teacher said.Melanie was shocked to hear this. So were her parents. They couldnt believe their
29、ears.“The girl is common. She does not have the possibility to become a ballerina, ”the dance teacher said. “Dont let her waste her time dreaming of becoming a dancer.”Disappointed, Melanie and her parents returned home. Tears rolled down Melanies face. Her dreams were broken within a matter of minu
30、tes. Without confidence, Melanie never attempted to dance again. She completed her studies and went on to become a teacher in school.Life was good and she kept herself busy with family and work. However, whenever she happened to pass the schools ballet room, memories of childhood dreams danced befor
31、e her eyes.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One day, the ballet teacher in her school was late._“What a performance, Melanie! You are a true ballerina!” said the ballet teacher entering the classroom._Passage 5(2023上河北唐山高二统考期末)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Danilo hurried through the halls
32、 of the school for a ceremony. Ahead of him, his dad was emptying a litter bin. Danilo hoped his dad wouldnt see him. He lowered his head, trying to get mixed in the other students. He felt embarrassed that his dad was the school cleaner.“Good morning, son,” his dad said as Danilo passed. Danilo wal
33、ked faster, pretending not to hear. But the other boys had already noticed.“Hey, Danilo,” a boy called out. “Theres your dad, Santos, the school sweeper! Maybe he needs your help.” Another boy cut in, mentioning that Santos could do so much more than sweep. He could empty the litter. The boys all la
34、ughed.Danilo couldnt wait to go to middle school next year, where he would not be laughed at. He looked over his shoulder. His dad worked with a smile on his face. How could he ignore such unkind words?Danilo ran into the meeting hall. Many people were seated, waiting for the school to announce the
35、Teacher of the Year. His best friends, Nathaniel and Frances, had saved a seat for him. They made guesses about whose name was on the plaque(匾). They had many wonderful teachers. Danilo liked all of them. It would be hard for him to pick just one.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.开头已给出。The time came for the headmaster to announce the Teacher of the Year._
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