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1、 to the unidiomatic use of English by Chinese speakerAvoid literal translationchinglishdiomaticBig filmblockbusterEarly lovePuppy loveConvenient noodlesInstant noodlesFist productKnockout productOne sex goodsDisposable goodsGrasp the connotation请帮我们(宣传)一下这个新产品。Please help us to propagate this new pr
2、oduct. Propagate should be replaced by promote他遇事总是先想着自己,真是太个人主义了 He is self-concerned and individualistic。 Individualistic should be replaced by selfishnessGrammarPronouns1Subjective vs. objectiveSubjective: I she you he it who whom theyObjective: me her you his whom whose them its2Singular vs. plu
3、ral3Point of view is used to describe the perspective in writing.Unit 3 the Better WordFocusConciseness (Brevity is the soul of wit. )Tip: 1 eliminate or expression rewrite that repeat the same point2cut out unnecessary intensifiers3avoid overusing the noun forms of verbs4change phrase into single w
4、ords5 change unnecessary “that, who and which” clause into phrases.Notice: redundancy is not always easy to spot. the best way is to proofread your writing carefully and try to find words, phrases or even sentence that are not essential.Preciseness:The concreteness of expressionGeneral words convey
5、inexact intangible and often abstract concepts whereas specific words provide precise, sensory or concrete details. For example: it was fine last weekend, so we went to the countryside and had a good time. We saw many things and people there. And we had a wonderful time.Improved: It was a wonderful
6、and relaxed weekend, we drive our private and spacious car to the countryside, there we were a enjoyable and relax time. We saw so many people who wearied plain and simple clothes and there are so much interesting tings like assembly and folk dance. Were welcomed by passionate villager and had delic
7、ious dinner with them. That was really a memorable and wonderful time.EffectivenessSentence Base Unit 4FocusThe sentence base, which is like the trunk of a tree, consists of at least one subject and one verb.Subject: to choose a good subject is the first crucial step in sentence writing, tell us who
8、 or what is responsible for an action, feelings, and state or process.Position of the subject: The subject is usually, through not always ,put at the beginning of a sentence.The subject of a declarative sentence- a sentence that makes a statement usually precedes the verb .but in one situation , it
9、follows the verb,( In the center of the painting stands a lady in white. )Voice: the voice of a verb depends on the relation between the verb and its subject. when the subject acts, the verb is in the active voice; when the subject is acted upon, the verb is in the passive voice.1Choosing the active
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